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Gerianne

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create a poem
« on: February 18, 2013, 06:40:35 am »
I wake up to see
all the beauty around me
I don't know what I'll find.....


now you add a few lines.

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Re: create a poem
« Reply #1 on: February 19, 2013, 04:19:05 am »
I wake up to see
all the beauty around me
I don't know what I'll find.....

Perhaps I'll go blind
but a pin holes worth of light
in a vast see of darkness...


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Re: create a poem
« Reply #2 on: February 19, 2013, 06:19:50 am »
Am I running out of time?
losing the light, my sight?
happiness turns to sadness.

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Re: create a poem
« Reply #3 on: February 19, 2013, 06:51:48 am »
rolling over into gladness
for the bit of light i see
is a happy reflection of me

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Re: create a poem
« Reply #4 on: February 19, 2013, 05:05:30 pm »
sometimes, a purr of a feline
is just a purr.
But on a sad or lonely day,
it is the sound of comfort,
all wrapped up
in fur.

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Re: create a poem
« Reply #5 on: February 19, 2013, 05:53:04 pm »
In the light I know
That if I stay or go
I will be taken care of
By God, I know.

If I shall lose
A part of me
In Heaven with God
Is where I want to be. :heart:

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